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March 20, 2024
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Claire

March 20, 2024

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Transcript

  1. Action Notes Red, Yellow, and Blue set up table

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  6. Action Notes Yellow digs through basket...

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  8. Action Notes to pull out more bread!

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  12. Dialog Yellow: "Oh!..."

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  18. Dialog Blue: "What"

  19. Dialog Blue (cont.): "is it?"

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  21. Dialog Yellow (cont.): "the"

  22. Dialog Yellow (cont.): "meat?"

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  27. Dialog Blue: "Well?"

  28. Dialog Red: "I"

  29. Dialog Red (cont.): "Was"

  30. Dialog Red (cont.): "in charge"

  31. Dialog Red (cont.): "of"

  32. Dialog Red (cont.): "the"

  33. Dialog Red (cont.): "tablecloth"

  34. Dialog Red (cont.): "dont"

  35. Dialog Red (cont.): "look at me."

  36. Dialog Yellow: "Well I was "

  37. Dialog Yellow (cont.): "in charge"

  38. Dialog Yellow (cont.): "of"

  39. Dialog Yellow (cont.): "the bread and"

  40. Dialog Yellow (cont.): "they"

  41. Dialog Yellow (cont.): "were in charge of the veggies"

  42. Dialog Yellow (cont.): "You were supposed to bring the meat!"

  43. Dialog Blue: "Why even bring a tablecloth?

  44. Dialog Blue (cont.): "How is that a "

  45. Dialog Blue (cont.): "whole task on?"

  46. Dialog Blue (cont.): "it's own?"

  47. Dialog Red: "Oh of course,"

  48. Dialog Red (cont.): "blame me!"

  49. Dialog Red (cont.): "I'll show you"

  50. Dialog Red (cont.): "the group chat we"

  51. Dialog Red (cont.): "wrote out"

  52. Dialog Red (cont.): "who was bringing what..."

  53. Dialog Red (cont.): "Yellow,"

  54. Dialog Red (cont.): "Bread."

  55. Dialog Red (cont.): "Blue, veggies."

  56. Dialog Red (cont.): "Red,"

  57. Dialog Red (cont.): "Me..."

  58. Dialog Red (cont.): "..."

  59. Dialog Everyone: "..."

  60. Dialog Everyone: "..."

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  63. Dialog Yellow: "*sigh* It's"

  64. Dialog Yellow (cont.): "okay,"

  65. Dialog Yellow (cont.): "we still have enough to work with"

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  67. Dialog Blue: "All I can make"

  68. Dialog Blue (cont.): "is a salad with"

  69. Dialog Blue (cont.): "giant croutons!"

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  71. Dialog Blue (cont.): "Oh, our"

  72. Dialog Blue (cont.): "hero. Did you bring any "

  73. Dialog Blue (cont.): "meat?"

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  81. Dialog Red: "You know,"

  82. Dialog Red (cont.): "we can make"

  83. Dialog Red (cont.): "smaller croutons by"

  84. Dialog Red (cont.): "ripping"

  85. Dialog Red (cont.): "the bread up!"

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