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BCG Truce Bomb Revisions

Maaike
May 31, 2022
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BCG Truce Bomb Revisions

Maaike

May 31, 2022
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  1. Scene 056 Panel 2 Dialog TILLY: I'd like for us

    to begin with some conflict resolution. Page 2/146
  2. Scene 059 Panel 1 Dialog GRAMMA: I DON'T WANNA SIT

    NEXT TO THIS OLD RECLUSE! Page 9/146
  3. Scene 059 Panel 2 Dialog GRIGORIAN: OLD RECLUSE? YOU MEAN

    YOU! GRAMMA: NO I'M TALKIN ABOUT YOU, OLD MAN! Page 10/146
  4. Scene 059 Panel 3 Dialog GRIGORIAN: OLD RECLUSE? YOU MEAN

    YOU! GRAMMA: NO I'M TALKIN ABOUT YOU, OLD MAN! Page 11/146
  5. Scene 060 Panel 1 Dialog TILLY: Okay I see we're

    gonna need to use some tools here. Page 12/146
  6. Scene 060 Panel 2 Dialog TILLY: Okay I see we're

    gonna need to use some tools here. Page 13/146
  7. Scene 062 Panel 1 Dialog GRAMMA: What's going on, Tilly?

    GRIGORIAN: I want to go home. Page 20/146
  8. Scene 062 Panel 2 Dialog GRAMMA: What's going on, Tilly?

    GRIGORIAN: I want to go home. Page 21/146
  9. Scene 064 Panel 1 Dialog GRAMMA: That ain't no talking

    stick! That's a piece o' bread! Page 27/146
  10. Scene 064 Panel 2 Dialog GRAMMA: That ain't no talking

    stick! That's a piece o' bread! Page 28/146
  11. Scene 064 Panel 3 Dialog GRAMMA: That ain't no talking

    stick! That's a piece o' bread! Page 29/146
  12. Scene 064 Panel 4 Dialog GRIGORIAN: And he’s no nurse!

    Nursing is skilled profession! He is unqualified! Page 30/146
  13. Scene 064 Panel 5 Dialog GRIGORIAN: And he’s no nurse!

    Nursing is skilled profession! He is unqualified! Page 31/146
  14. Scene 065 Panel 3 Dialog CRICKET: For the record, I

    AM unqualified, but you don't have to be so rude! Page 34/146
  15. Scene 066 Panel 3 Dialog TILLY: and whoever holds this

    sacred talking stick will have the floor. Page 37/146
  16. Scene 066 Panel 4 Dialog TILLY: and whoever holds this

    sacred talking stick will have the floor. Page 38/146
  17. Scene 067 Panel 1 Dialog TILLY: (passing it to Grigorian)

    Why don’t you give it a try first? Page 39/146
  18. Scene 070 Panel 2 Dialog GRAMMA: It’s a “tool.” To

    “talk about your feelings.” Page 52/146
  19. Scene 070 Panel 3 Dialog GRAMMA: It’s a “tool.” To

    “talk about your feelings.” Page 53/146
  20. Scene 070 Panel 4 Dialog GRAMMA: It’s a “tool.” To

    “talk about your feelings.” Page 54/146
  21. Scene 072 Panel 1 Dialog TILLY: Let’s back it up

    a little, shall we? Page 59/146
  22. Scene 072 Panel 2 Dialog TILLY: Let’s back it up

    a little, shall we? Page 60/146
  23. Scene 072 Panel 3 Dialog TILLY: Mr. Grigorian, please tell

    me about the day your feud with Gramma began. Page 61/146
  24. Scene 073 Panel 3 Dialog GRIGORIAN (V.O.): It was my

    first day in Big City... Page 64/146
  25. Scene 073 Panel 4 Dialog GRIGORIAN (V.O.): It was my

    first day in Big City... Page 65/146
  26. Scene 074 Panel 1 Dialog GRIGORIAN (V.O.): It was my

    first day in Big City... Page 66/146
  27. Scene 074 Panel 2 Dialog GRIGORIAN (V.O.): It was my

    first day in Big City... Page 67/146
  28. Scene 074 Panel 3 Dialog GRIGORIAN (V.O.): I had new

    lease on life and new lease on apartment. Page 68/146
  29. Scene 074 Panel 4 Dialog GRIGORIAN (V.O.): I had new

    lease on life and new lease on apartment. Page 69/146
  30. Scene 074 Panel 5 Dialog GRIGORIAN (V.O.): I had new

    lease on life and new lease on apartment. Page 70/146
  31. Scene 074 Panel 6 Dialog GRIGORIAN (V.O.): I had new

    lease on life and new lease on apartment. Page 71/146
  32. Scene 074 Panel 7 Dialog GRIGORIAN (V.O.): I had new

    lease on life and new lease on apartment. Page 72/146
  33. Scene 074 Panel 8 Dialog GRIGORIAN (V.O.): I had new

    lease on life and new lease on apartment. Page 73/146
  34. Scene 074 Panel 9 Dialog GRIGORIAN (V.O.): I had new

    lease on life and new lease on apartment. Page 74/146
  35. Scene 074 Panel 10 Dialog GRIGORIAN (V.O.): But my new

    neighbor was not so welcoming. Page 75/146
  36. Scene 075 Panel 1 Dialog GRIGORIAN (V.O.): But my new

    neighbor was not so welcoming. Page 76/146
  37. Scene 076 Panel 1 Dialog YOUNGER GRAMMA: Quit yer yammerin’,

    city boy! Ya sound downright awful! Page 80/146
  38. Scene 076 Panel 2 Dialog YOUNGER GRAMMA: Quit yer yammerin’,

    city boy! Ya sound downright awful! Page 81/146
  39. Scene 076 Panel 3 Dialog YOUNGER GRAMMA: Quit yer yammerin’,

    city boy! Ya sound downright awful! Page 82/146
  40. Scene 077 Panel 1 Dialog GRIGORIAN (V.O.): It was the

    rudest welcome I’ve ever received. Page 83/146
  41. Scene 077 Panel 2 Dialog GRIGORIAN (V.O.): It was the

    rudest welcome I’ve ever received. Page 84/146
  42. Scene 082 Panel 2 Dialog TILLY: Hold on, nurse! Let's

    see where this goes.... Page 99/146
  43. Scene 083 Panel 1 Dialog GRAMMA: Hoards of city folks

    were movin’ in around my house. It used to be quiet farm land! All I wanted was peace and quiet! Instead I got this squawkin canary next door! Page 100/146
  44. Scene 083 Panel 2 Dialog GRAMMA: Hoards of city folks

    were movin’ in around my house. It used to be quiet farm land! All I wanted was peace and quiet! Instead I got this squawkin canary next door! Page 101/146
  45. Scene 083 Panel 3 Dialog GRAMMA: Hoards of city folks

    were movin’ in around my house. It used to be quiet farm land! All I wanted was peace and quiet! Instead I got this squawkin canary next door! Page 102/146
  46. Scene 084 Panel 1 Dialog GRIGORIAN: All I wanted was

    to serenade my neighbors with a song, like I did in my homeland! I was trying to be- Page 103/146
  47. Scene 084 Panel 2 Dialog GRIGORIAN: All I wanted was

    to serenade my neighbors with a song, like I did in my homeland! I was trying to be- Page 104/146
  48. Scene 084 Panel 3 Dialog GRIGORIAN: All I wanted was

    to serenade my neighbors with a song, like I did in my homeland! I was trying to be- Page 105/146
  49. Scene 084 Panel 4 Dialog GRIGORIAN: All I wanted was

    to serenade my neighbors with a song, like I did in my homeland! I was trying to be- Page 106/146
  50. Scene 087 Panel 5 Dialog GRAMMA: I-- I thought you

    were singing to be annoying... Page 117/146
  51. Scene 087 Panel 6 Dialog GRAMMA: I-- I thought you

    were singing to be annoying... Page 118/146
  52. Scene 087 Panel 7 Dialog GRAMMA: I-- I thought you

    were singing to be annoying... Page 119/146
  53. Scene 088 Panel 3 Dialog GRIGORIAN: I guess this was

    all... a misunderstanding? Page 122/146
  54. Scene 088 Panel 4 Dialog GRIGORIAN: I guess this was

    all... a misunderstanding? Page 123/146
  55. Scene 088 Panel 5 Dialog GRAMMA: Yes... I guess we

    no longer have a reason to... fight? Page 124/146
  56. Scene 088 Panel 6 Dialog GRAMMA: Yes... I guess we

    no longer have a reason to... fight? Page 125/146
  57. Scene 088 Panel 7 Dialog TILLY: Quite the breakthrough, is

    there anything you'd like to say to one another? Page 126/146
  58. Scene 088 Panel 8 Dialog TILLY: Quite the breakthrough, is

    there anything you'd like to say to one another? Page 127/146
  59. Scene 089 Panel 1 Dialog GRIGORIAN: I am sorry as

    well. Dumping garbage on you was perhaps not so neighborly. Page 132/146
  60. Scene 089 Panel 2 Dialog GRIGORIAN: I am sorry as

    well. Dumping garbage on you was perhaps not so neighborly. Page 133/146
  61. Scene 089 Panel 3 Dialog GRIGORIAN: I am sorry as

    well. Dumping garbage on you was perhaps not so neighborly. Page 134/146