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The Red Line by Ashley Lam

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October 01, 2020
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The Red Line by Ashley Lam

An original story about an artist named Logan looking for human connection on a crowded subway ride.

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October 01, 2020
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Transcript

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  13. Scene 003 Panel 003 Dialog Stranger 1: Watch it! Red

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  15. Scene 003 Panel 005 Dialog PA System: Doors are closing.

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  16. Scene 003 Panel 006 Dialog PA System: Doors are closing.

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  19. Scene 004 Panel 003 Dialog LOGAN: Wup! Action Notes The

    train lurches. Red Line Page 19/231

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  21. Scene 004 Panel 005 Dialog Stranger 2: HEY! LOGAN: Sorry!

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  24. Scene 004 Panel 008 Dialog LOGAN: Yeagh! Red Line Page

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  26. Scene 004 Panel 010 Dialog LOGAN: OOF. Red Line Page

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  28. Scene 004 Panel 012 Dialog LOGAN: Hoo... Red Line Page

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  30. Scene 004 Panel 014 Dialog LOGAN: Rough train, huh? Red

    Line Page 30/231

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  33. Scene 004 Panel 017 Dialog SFX: <Zipp!> Red Line Page

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  47. Scene 007 Panel 001 Dialog LOGAN: Hmm. Red Line Page

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  55. Scene 009 Panel 003 Dialog LOGAN: <Sigh.> Red Line Page

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  56. Scene 010 Panel 001 Red Line Page 56/231

  57. Scene 010 Panel 002 Dialog RACHEL (O.S.): Excuse me... Red

    Line Page 57/231

  58. Scene 010 Panel 003 Dialog RACHEL (O.S.): Excuse me... Red

    Line Page 58/231

  59. Scene 011 Panel 001 Dialog RACHEL: Oops, right behind you.

    Red Line Page 59/231

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  61. Scene 011 Panel 003 Dialog RACHEL: S'cuse me. Red Line

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  66. Scene 012 Panel 001 Dialog LOGAN: <Gasp.> Red Line Page

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  78. Scene 015 Panel 003 Dialog RACHEL: Oh! Red Line Page

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  79. Scene 015 Panel 004 Dialog RACHEL: Pardon me. Red Line

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  80. Scene 015 Panel 005 Red Line Page 80/231

  81. Scene 015 Panel 006 Dialog PA System: Arriving at Marienplatz

    Station. Red Line Page 81/231

  82. Scene 015 Panel 007 Dialog PA System: Arriving at Marienplatz

    Station. Action Notes The train rumbles as it brakes. Red Line Page 82/231

  83. Scene 015 Panel 008 Dialog RACHEL: Weagh!! LOGAN: Careful! Red

    Line Page 83/231

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  85. Scene 015 Panel 010 Dialog LOGAN: I got you! Red

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  86. Scene 015 Panel 011 Dialog LOGAN: I got you! Red

    Line Page 86/231

  87. Scene 016 Panel 001 Dialog LOGAN: Hoo... Red Line Page

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  88. Scene 016 Panel 002 Dialog LOGAN: Hey... Red Line Page

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  89. Scene 016 Panel 003 Dialog LOGAN: You okay? Red Line

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  90. Scene 017 Panel 001 Dialog RACHEL: Yeah... Red Line Page

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  91. Scene 017 Panel 002 Dialog RACHEL: I'm... Red Line Page

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  92. Scene 017 Panel 003 Dialog RACHEL: <GASP!> Red Line Page

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  93. Scene 017 Panel 004 Dialog RACHEL: What... Red Line Page

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  94. Scene 018 Panel 001 Dialog LOGAN: Sorry. Did I hurt

    you? Red Line Page 94/231

  95. Scene 018 Panel 002 Dialog LOGAN: Sorry. Did I hurt

    you? Red Line Page 95/231

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  98. Scene 018 Panel 005 Dialog LOGAN: Huh... Red Line Page

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  100. Scene 018 Panel 007 Dialog LOGAN: HEY! WAIT! Red Line

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  101. Scene 018 Panel 008 Dialog LOGAN: Your purse! Red Line

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  109. Scene 019 Panel 007 Dialog PA System: The doors are

    closing. Action Notes The doors start to close. Red Line Page 109/231

  110. Scene 019 Panel 008 Dialog PA System: The doors are

    closing. LOGAN: Wha--?! Action Notes Something pulls Logan back. Red Line Page 110/231

  111. Scene 019 Panel 009 Dialog PA System: The doors are

    closing. LOGAN: Where -- Red Line Page 111/231

  112. Scene 019 Panel 010 Action Notes The train starts to

    leave the station. Red Line Page 112/231

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  127. Scene 023 Panel 002 Dialog LOGAN: Hmm. Red Line Page

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  128. Scene 023 Panel 003 Dialog LOGAN: Hmm. Red Line Page

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  138. Scene 026 Panel 004 Dialog RACHEL: Hi. Red Line Page

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  139. Scene 026 Panel 005 Dialog LOGAN: Oh! Red Line Page

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  141. Scene 027 Panel 001 Dialog LOGAN: Hi... Red Line Page

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  142. Scene 027 Panel 002 Dialog RACHEL: I'm Rachel. Red Line

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  143. Scene 027 Panel 003 Dialog LOGAN: I'm Logan! Red Line

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  144. Scene 027 Panel 004 Dialog RACHEL: I saw that you...

    you draw? Red Line Page 144/231

  145. Scene 027 Panel 005 Dialog LOGAN: Oh! Red Line Page

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  146. Scene 027 Panel 006 Dialog LOGAN: Here, take a look.

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  147. Scene 028 Panel 001 Dialog LOGAN: I try to draw

    the people around me... Red Line Page 147/231

  148. Scene 028 Panel 002 Dialog LOGAN: I try to draw

    the people around me... Red Line Page 148/231

  149. Scene 028 Panel 003 Dialog LOGAN: But they all look...

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  150. Scene 028 Panel 004 Dialog LOGAN: But they all look...

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  151. Scene 028 Panel 005 Dialog LOGAN: Unhappy. Red Line Page

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  152. Scene 028 Panel 006 Dialog LOGAN: Unhappy. Red Line Page

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  153. Scene 028 Panel 007 Dialog LOGAN: And then... Red Line

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  154. Scene 029 Panel 001 Dialog LOGAN: You. Red Line Page

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  155. Scene 029 Panel 002 Dialog RACHEL: Oh! Red Line Page

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  156. Scene 029 Panel 003 Dialog RACHEL: You need to finish!

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  157. Scene 029 Panel 004 Dialog RACHEL: You need to finish!

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  158. Scene 029 Panel 005 Dialog RACHEL: You need to finish!

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  160. Scene 030 Panel 001 Dialog LOGAN: R-- Red Line Page

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  161. Scene 030 Panel 002 Dialog LOGAN: Really? Red Line Page

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  162. Scene 030 Panel 003 Dialog LOGAN: Okay! Red Line Page

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  163. Scene 030 Panel 004 Dialog LOGAN: Thanks! Red Line Page

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  169. Scene 032 Panel 001 Red Line Page 169/231

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  171. Scene 032 Panel 003 Dialog PA System: Arriving at Laim

    Station. Red Line Page 171/231

  172. Scene 032 Panel 004 Dialog PA System: Arriving at Laim

    Station. Red Line Page 172/231

  173. Scene 032 Panel 005 Action Notes The train braking causes

    Logan's hand to shake. Red Line Page 173/231

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  176. Scene 033 Panel 001 Dialog LOGAN: Tch. Red Line Page

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  177. Scene 033 Panel 002 Dialog LOGAN: Well... Red Line Page

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  178. Scene 033 Panel 003 Dialog LOGAN: Maybe next time? Red

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  179. Scene 033 Panel 004 Dialog RACHEL: Okay! Red Line Page

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  180. Scene 033 Panel 005 Dialog LOGAN: Great! Red Line Page

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  181. Scene 033 Panel 006 Dialog LOGAN: This is my usual

    commute. Red Line Page 181/231

  182. Scene 033 Panel 007 Dialog LOGAN: This is my usual

    commute. Red Line Page 182/231

  183. Scene 033 Panel 008 Dialog LOGAN: This is my usual

    commute. Red Line Page 183/231

  184. Scene 034 Panel 001 Dialog LOGAN: So I guess I'll

    see you later then. Red Line Page 184/231

  185. Scene 034 Panel 002 Dialog LOGAN: So I guess I'll

    see you later then. Red Line Page 185/231

  186. Scene 034 Panel 003 Dialog LOGAN: So I guess I'll

    see you later then. Red Line Page 186/231

  187. Scene 034 Panel 004 Dialog LOGAN: So I guess I'll

    see you later then. Red Line Page 187/231

  188. Scene 034 Panel 005 Dialog LOGAN: Bye, Rachel! Red Line

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  192. Scene 035 Panel 002 Dialog RACHEL: Uh! Red Line Page

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  193. Scene 035 Panel 003 Dialog RACHEL: WAIT! Red Line Page

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  194. Scene 036 Panel 001 Dialog RACHEL: Your bag! Red Line

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  195. Scene 036 Panel 002 Dialog RACHEL: Your bag! Red Line

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  196. Scene 036 Panel 003 Dialog RACHEL: Excuse me! Red Line

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  197. Scene 036 Panel 004 Dialog RACHEL: WAIT! Red Line Page

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  198. Scene 037 Panel 001 Dialog RACHEL (O.S.): WAIT! Red Line

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  199. Scene 037 Panel 002 Dialog RACHEL (O.S.): WAIT! Red Line

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  200. Scene 037 Panel 003 Dialog RACHEL (O.S.): WAIT! Red Line

    Page 200/231

  201. Scene 037 Panel 004 Dialog RACHEL (O.S.): WAIT! Red Line

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  202. Scene 037 Panel 005 Dialog RACHEL (O.S.): LOGAN! Red Line

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  203. Scene 037 Panel 006 Dialog RACHEL (O.S.): YOUR BAG! Red

    Line Page 203/231

  204. Scene 037 Panel 007 Dialog LOGAN: Oh! Red Line Page

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  205. Scene 038 Panel 001 Dialog PA System: The doors are

    closing. Red Line Page 205/231

  206. Scene 038 Panel 002 Dialog PA System: The doors are

    closing. Red Line Page 206/231

  207. Scene 038 Panel 003 Dialog PA System: The doors are

    closing. Action Notes The doors close on Rachel's arm. Red Line Page 207/231

  208. Scene 038 Panel 004 Dialog SFX: <Puff!> Action Notes And

    her arm effervesces into a sparkly smoke. Red Line Page 208/231

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  213. Scene 038 Panel 009 Action Notes The train moves to

    leave the station. Red Line Page 213/231

  214. Scene 039 Panel 001 Dialog LOGAN: Wha-- Red Line Page

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  215. Scene 039 Panel 002 Dialog LOGAN: Uh. Red Line Page

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  216. Scene 039 Panel 003 Dialog LOGAN: Rachel?! Red Line Page

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