Changes by Ashley Lam

A story inspired by the prompt "something is revealed on a playground," during a mentorship with Kris Wimberly.
Character designs by Kris Wimberly.

Transcript

2. Scene 002 Panel 001 Slugging EXT. Park playground - Day. Overcast. Changes Page 2/117
3. Scene 002 Panel 002 Changes Page 3/117
4. Scene 002 Panel 003 Changes Page 4/117
5. Scene 002 Panel 004 Changes Page 5/117
6. Scene 002 Panel 005 Changes Page 6/117
7. Scene 002 Panel 006 Changes Page 7/117
8. Scene 002 Panel 007 Changes Page 8/117
9. Scene 002 Panel 008 Changes Page 9/117
10. Scene 002 Panel 009 Changes Page 10/117
11. Scene 003 Panel 001 Dialog MAX (O.S.): Yaaaaaay! Changes Page 11/117
12. Scene 003 Panel 002 Dialog MAX (cont'd): Yaaaaaay! Changes Page 12/117
13. Scene 003 Panel 003 Dialog MAX (cont'd): Yaaaaaay! Changes Page 13/117
14. Scene 003 Panel 004 Dialog MAX (cont'd): Yaaaaaay! Changes Page 14/117
15. Scene 003 Panel 005 Dialog MAX (cont'd): Yaaaaaay! Changes Page 15/117
16. Scene 003 Panel 006 Dialog MAX (cont'd): Yaaaaaay! Changes Page 16/117
17. Scene 003 Panel 007 Dialog MAX: Woooo! Changes Page 17/117
18. Scene 003 Panel 008 Dialog MAX (cont'd): Woooo! Changes Page 18/117
19. Scene 003 Panel 009 Dialog MAX (cont'd): Woooo! Changes Page 19/117
20. Scene 003 Panel 010 Dialog MAX (cont'd): Woooo! Changes Page 20/117
21. Scene 004 Panel 001 Dialog MAX: <laughing> Changes Page 21/117
22. Scene 004 Panel 002 Dialog MAX: <laughing> Changes Page 22/117
23. Scene 004 Panel 003 Dialog MAX: <laughing> Changes Page 23/117
24. Scene 004 Panel 004 Dialog MAX: <laughing> Changes Page 24/117
25. Scene 004 Panel 005 Dialog MAX: <laughing> Changes Page 25/117
26. Scene 004 Panel 006 Dialog MAX: <laughing> Changes Page 26/117
27. Scene 004 Panel 007 Changes Page 27/117
28. Scene 004 Panel 008 Changes Page 28/117
29. Scene 004 Panel 009 Changes Page 29/117
30. Scene 004 Panel 010 Dialog MAX: <laughter> Changes Page 30/117
31. Scene 004 Panel 011 Dialog MAX: <laughter> Changes Page 31/117
32. Scene 004 Panel 012 Dialog MAX: <laughter> Changes Page 32/117
33. Scene 004 Panel 013 Dialog CHLOE: Max, MAX: <laughter> Changes Page 33/117
34. Scene 004 Panel 014 Dialog CHLOE (cont'd): guess who's here! Changes Page 34/117
35. Scene 004 Panel 015 Changes Page 35/117
36. Scene 004 Panel 016 Dialog RACHEL: Hey guys! Changes Page 36/117
37. Scene 004 Panel 017 Dialog RACHEL: Heya, Maxie! Changes Page 37/117
38. Scene 004 Panel 018 Dialog RACHEL: You're getting up Changes Page 38/117
39. Scene 004 Panel 019 Dialog RACHEL (cont'd): real high Changes Page 39/117
40. Scene 004 Panel 020 Dialog RACHEL (cont'd): in that swing! Changes Page 40/117
41. Scene 005 Panel 001 Dialog MAX: Hiya Changes Page 41/117
42. Scene 005 Panel 002 Dialog MAX (cont'd): Auntie Rachel! Changes Page 42/117
43. Scene 005 Panel 003 Dialog MAX: I'm Changes Page 43/117
44. Scene 005 Panel 004 Dialog MAX (cont'd): gonna Changes Page 44/117
45. Scene 005 Panel 005 Dialog MAX (cont'd): fly Changes Page 45/117
46. Scene 005 Panel 006 Dialog MAX (cont'd): to Changes Page 46/117
47. Scene 005 Panel 007 Dialog MAX (cont'd): the Changes Page 47/117
48. Scene 005 Panel 008 Dialog MAX (cont'd): moon! Changes Page 48/117
49. Scene 006 Panel 001 Changes Page 49/117
50. Scene 006 Panel 002 Changes Page 50/117
51. Scene 006 Panel 003 Dialog RACHEL: It's a little Changes Page 51/117
52. Scene 006 Panel 004 Dialog RACHEL (cont'd): cold for Changes Page 52/117
53. Scene 006 Panel 005 Dialog RACHEL (cont'd): the Changes Page 53/117
54. Scene 006 Panel 006 Dialog RACHEL (cont'd): playground.. Changes Page 54/117
55. Scene 006 Panel 007 Dialog CHLOE: Yeah. Changes Page 55/117
56. Scene 006 Panel 008 Dialog CHLOE (cont'd): Max wanted Changes Page 56/117
57. Scene 006 Panel 009 Dialog CHLOE (cont'd): to play Changes Page 57/117
58. Scene 006 Panel 010 Dialog CHLOE (cont'd): on the Changes Page 58/117
59. Scene 006 Panel 011 Dialog CHLOE (cont'd): swings Changes Page 59/117
60. Scene 006 Panel 012 Dialog CHLOE (cont'd): before... Changes Page 60/117
61. Scene 006 Panel 013 Dialog CHLOE (cont'd): before... Changes Page 61/117
62. Scene 006 Panel 014 Dialog CHLOE (cont'd): it got Changes Page 62/117
63. Scene 006 Panel 015 Dialog CHLOE (cont'd): too late. Changes Page 63/117
64. Scene 007 Panel 001 Dialog MAX: Harder, mommy! Changes Page 64/117
65. Scene 007 Panel 002 Dialog MAX (cont'd): I want Changes Page 65/117
66. Scene 007 Panel 003 Dialog MAX (cont'd): to go Changes Page 66/117
67. Scene 007 Panel 004 Dialog MAX (cont'd): super far! Changes Page 67/117
68. Scene 008 Panel 001 Dialog CHLOE: You Changes Page 68/117
69. Scene 008 Panel 002 Dialog CHLOE (con'td): got Changes Page 69/117
70. Scene 008 Panel 003 Dialog CHLOE (cont'd): it! Changes Page 70/117
71. Scene 008 Panel 004 Dialog CHLOE (cont'd): Keep pumping! Changes Page 71/117
72. Scene 008 Panel 005 Changes Page 72/117
73. Scene 008 Panel 006 Dialog RACHEL: So... Changes Page 73/117
74. Scene 008 Panel 007 Dialog RACHEL (cont'd): how are you feeling? Changes Page 74/117
75. Scene 009 Panel 001 Dialog CHLOE: So Changes Page 75/117
76. Scene 009 Panel 002 Dialog CHLOE (cont'd): excited! Changes Page 76/117
77. Scene 009 Panel 003 Dialog CHLOE (cont'd): excited! Changes Page 77/117
78. Scene 009 Panel 004 Dialog CHLOE (cont'd): Scared.. Changes Page 78/117
79. Scene 009 Panel 005 Dialog CHLOE (cont'd): but excited. Changes Page 79/117
80. Scene 009 Panel 006 Dialog CHLOE (cont'd): I feel like we're Changes Page 80/117
81. Scene 009 Panel 007 Dialog CHLOE (cont'd): ready Changes Page 81/117
82. Scene 009 Panel 008 Dialog CHLOE (cont'd): for something Changes Page 82/117
83. Scene 009 Panel 009 Dialog CHLOE (cont'd): different, Changes Page 83/117
84. Scene 009 Panel 010 Dialog CHLOE (cont'd): y'know? Changes Page 84/117
85. Scene 010 Panel 001 Dialog RACHEL: Yeah Changes Page 85/117
86. Scene 010 Panel 002 Dialog RACHEL (cont'd): I get that. Changes Page 86/117
87. Scene 010 Panel 003 Dialog RACHEL (cont'd): And Changes Page 87/117
88. Scene 010 Panel 004 Dialog RACHEL (cont'd): how's Changes Page 88/117
89. Scene 010 Panel 005 Dialog RACHEL (cont'd): Max? Changes Page 89/117
90. Scene 011 Panel 001 Dialog MAX: What'd Changes Page 90/117
91. Scene 011 Panel 002 Dialog MAX (cont'd): you Changes Page 91/117
92. Scene 011 Panel 003 Dialog MAX (cont'd): say?! Changes Page 92/117
93. Scene 012 Panel 001 Dialog CHLOE: Auntie Rachel Changes Page 93/117
94. Scene 012 Panel 002 Dialog CHLOE (cont'd): said she found Changes Page 94/117
95. Scene 012 Panel 003 Dialog CHLOE (cont'd): one of your books! Changes Page 95/117
96. Scene 012 Panel 004 Dialog CHLOE (cont'd): She put it in Changes Page 96/117
97. Scene 012 Panel 005 Dialog CHLOE (cont'd): the box for us. Changes Page 97/117
98. Scene 012 Panel 006 Changes Page 98/117
99. Scene 012 Panel 007 Dialog RACHEL: You haven't Changes Page 99/117
100. Scene 012 Panel 008 Dialog RACHEL (cont'd): told him Changes Page 100/117
101. Scene 012 Panel 009 Dialog RACHEL (cont'd): that you Changes Page 101/117
102. Scene 012 Panel 010 Dialog RACHEL (cont'd): two are Changes Page 102/117
103. Scene 013 Panel 001 Dialog RACHEL (cont'd): MOVING Changes Page 103/117
104. Scene 013 Panel 002 Dialog RACHEL (cont'd): tomorrow?! CHLOE: SHH SHH SHH! Changes Page 104/117
105. Scene 013 Panel 003 Dialog CHLOE (cont'd): SHH SHH SHH! Changes Page 105/117
106. Scene 014 Panel 001 Changes Page 106/117
107. Scene 014 Panel 002 Changes Page 107/117
108. Scene 014 Panel 003 Changes Page 108/117
109. Scene 014 Panel 004 Changes Page 109/117
110. Scene 014 Panel 005 Changes Page 110/117
111. Scene 014 Panel 006 Changes Page 111/117
112. Scene 015 Panel 001 Changes Page 112/117
113. Scene 015 Panel 002 Changes Page 113/117
114. Scene 015 Panel 003 Changes Page 114/117
115. Scene 015 Panel 004 Changes Page 115/117
116. Scene 015 Panel 005 Dialog MAX: What? Changes Page 116/117
117. Scene 016 Panel 001 Changes Page 117/117