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Elder's Game

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February 26, 2023

Elder's Game

A normal day in the peaceful mountain village is crashed by rambunctious tourists, can the power of the elderly scare them away? Young Pala refuses to be turned away from her reason for coming to this tiny town.
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February 26, 2023
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  1. Scene 0 Shot 1 Panel 1 Scene 0 Shot 1

    Panel 2 Action Notes Two planes land Scene 0 Shot 1 Panel 3 Scene 0 Shot 1 Panel 4 Action Notes Passengers emerge Elder's Game Page 1/19
  2. Scene 0 Shot 1 Panel 5 Scene 0 Shot 2

    Panel 1 Scene 0 Shot 2 Panel 2 Scene 0 Shot 2 Panel 3 Elder's Game Page 2/19
  3. Scene 0 Shot 2 Panel 4 Scene 0 Shot 2

    Panel 5 Scene 0 Shot 3 Panel 1 Scene 0 Shot 3 Panel 2 Elder's Game Page 3/19
  4. Scene 0 Shot 3 Panel 3 Dialog Distant Explosion Scene

    0 Shot 3 Panel 4 Scene 0 Shot 3 Panel 5 Scene 0 Shot 3 Panel 6 Dialog Racte: Oh brother... Elder's Game Page 4/19
  5. Scene 0 Shot 4 Panel 1 Dialog Racte: No outgoing

    flights today Action Notes Racte leans against chair Scene 0 Shot 4 Panel 2 Dialog Racte: means no worries. Action Notes Explosion 1 Scene 0 Shot 4 Panel 3 Action Notes Explosion 2 Scene 0 Shot 4 Panel 4 Dialog Racte: Hey!! Action Notes Explosion 3 Elder's Game Page 5/19
  6. Scene 0 Shot 4 Panel 5 Dialog Racte: Bad tourists!!

    Not the diner! Scene 0 Shot 4 Panel 6 Action Notes Racte slides down railing as they make the turn Scene 0 Shot 4 Panel 7 Action Notes Get to their feet coming down the stairs Scene 0 Shot 4 Panel 8 Action Notes Racte exits Elder's Game Page 6/19
  7. Scene 0 Shot 4 Panel 9 Action Notes Blur zoom

    in town Scene 0 Shot 5 Panel 1 Scene 0 Shot 5 Panel 2 Action Notes Blob of tourists rampaging through the streets Scene 0 Shot 5 Panel 3 Action Notes Racte enters Elder's Game Page 7/19
  8. Scene 0 Shot 5 Panel 4 Action Notes Storekeep leans

    away for proper look, Racte goes in for the steal Scene 0 Shot 5 Panel 5 Dialog Storekeep: It's on the move! Scene 0 Shot 5 Panel 6 Dialog Racte: I've got just the trick, heh. Action Notes Storekeep rolls their eyes Scene 0 Shot 5 Panel 7 Action Notes Camera follows Racte as they come against the back wall of the shop Elder's Game Page 8/19
  9. Scene 0 Shot 6 Panel 1 Scene 0 Shot 6

    Panel 2 Action Notes Racte peeking past the wall Scene 0 Shot 6 Panel 3 Action Notes Tourist mob enters Scene 0 Shot 6 Panel 4 Elder's Game Page 9/19
  10. Scene 0 Shot 6 Panel 5 Action Notes Elderly Racte

    activates, slide in front of crowd wave Scene 0 Shot 7 Panel 1 Action Notes Elderly Racte unfazed as the wave breaks around them Scene 0 Shot 7 Panel 2 Action Notes Pala panicked as she washes with the rest of crowd Scene 0 Shot 8 Panel 1 Action Notes Elderly Racte deactivates Elder's Game Page 10/19
  11. Scene 0 Shot 8 Panel 2 Action Notes Book falls

    onto Pala's face as she gets up Scene 0 Shot 9 Panel 1 Dialog Pala: Hey... Scene 0 Shot 9 Panel 2 Dialog Pala: Aren't you the Great Ace Racte? Scene 0 Shot 9 Panel 3 Dialog Tourists: CELEBRITY? Elder's Game Page 11/19
  12. Scene 0 Shot 9 Panel 4 Scene 0 Shot 10

    Panel 1 Dialog E.Racte: Who? Action Notes Elderly Racte reengaged, detailed old face Scene 0 Shot 11 Panel 1 Scene 0 Shot 11 Panel 2 Dialog Tour Guide: False alarm! Elder's Game Page 12/19
  13. Scene 0 Shot 11 Panel 3 Dialog Tour Guide: And

    to your left- Scene 0 Shot 12 Panel 1 Dialog Pala: You're no great pilot... Scene 0 Shot 12 Panel 2 Dialog E.Racte: Aren't you a darling lil' youngin'? Scene 0 Shot 13 Panel 1 Action Notes Pala disappointed Elder's Game Page 13/19
  14. Scene 0 Shot 13 Panel 2 Action Notes Zoom out,

    Racte considers Scene 0 Shot 13 Panel 3 Action Notes Pala turns away Scene 0 Shot 13 Panel 4 Action Notes Racte makes their decision Scene 0 Shot 14 Panel 1 Dialog Racte: Chin up kid, Elder's Game Page 14/19
  15. Scene 0 Shot 14 Panel 2 Dialog Racte: You came

    here looking for something big eh? Scene 0 Shot 14 Panel 3 Dialog Racte: Well any good pilot knows.. Scene 0 Shot 14 Panel 4 Action Notes Blur pan up Scene 0 Shot 15 Panel 1 Dialog Racte: That even something as empty as the sky holds a lot to pay attention to. Elder's Game Page 15/19
  16. Scene 0 Shot 15 Panel 2 Dialog Racte: So don't

    get so wrapped up in just one direction. Scene 0 Shot 15 Panel 3 Dialog Racte: There's a whole lot around you to be considered too y'know? Scene 0 Shot 16 Panel 1 Dialog Racte: I could stay here for decades, Action Notes Racte turns as they direct their arm Scene 0 Shot 16 Panel 2 Dialog Racte: And never run out of new things to see. Elder's Game Page 16/19
  17. Scene 0 Shot 17 Panel 1 Dialog Pala: Woooah.. Scene

    0 Shot 17 Panel 2 Dialog Pala: Wait a sec.. Scene 0 Shot 18 Panel 1 Dialog Pala: Why bother with the old facade just to give me what I wanted anyway? Scene 0 Shot 18 Panel 2 Dialog Racte: How can I be forward with it when I'm telling you to stop blindly going forward eh? Elder's Game Page 17/19
  18. Scene 0 Shot 18 Panel 3 Dialog Racte: Can't have

    the tourists believing I'm not senile now can I? Scene 0 Shot 18 Panel 4 Dialog Racte: Besides nobody'll believe you heard this heh. Scene 0 Shot 18 Panel 5 Dialog Pala: HEY! Action Notes Racte exits Scene 0 Shot 18 Panel 6 Dialog Pala: Hmph Elder's Game Page 18/19
  19. Scene 0 Shot 18 Panel 7 Action Notes Pala takes

    a glance around her Scene 0 Shot 18 Panel 8 Action Notes Pala exits, FIN Elder's Game Page 19/19