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Baking is Science

Baking is Science

Comedy sequence about 2 brothers that each have their own thoughts about how to bake a pie.

This was done as an assignment for Calvin Tsang’s “Story Development” class on Brainstorm.

Kevin Di Pasupil

July 23, 2022
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  1. Scene 3 Panel 4 Dialog Donnie: I already put in

    the Baking is Science Page 19/196
  2. Scene 3 Panel 12 Dialog Mikey: Oh hey, strawberries! Can

    I have one- Baking is Science Page 27/196
  3. Scene 3 Panel 14 Dialog Donnie: These are for the

    pie Baking is Science Page 29/196
  4. Scene 4 Panel 2 Dialog Mikey: Can't I have just

    one? Baking is Science Page 32/196
  5. Scene 4 Panel 3 Dialog Mikey: You don't need alllll

    of them for the pie, do you? Baking is Science Page 33/196
  6. Scene 5 Panel 1 Dialog Donnie: Of course I do!

    Baking is Science Page 34/196
  7. Scene 6 Panel 2 Dialog Donnie: you have to measure

    everything exactly. Baking is Science Page 37/196
  8. Scene 6 Panel 3 Dialog Donnie: Otherwise, the whole thing

    falls apart. Baking is Science Page 38/196
  9. Scene 7 Panel 2 Dialog Donnie: Mikey! Do you have

    to do that here?! Baking is Science Page 42/196
  10. Scene 7 Panel 3 Dialog Donnie: I'm on a time

    crunch right now. Baking is Science Page 43/196
  11. Scene 7 Panel 4 Dialog Donnie: So unless you're gonna

    help, Baking is Science Page 44/196
  12. Scene 7 Panel 5 Dialog Donnie: could you please vacate

    the- Baking is Science Page 45/196
  13. Scene 7 Panel 6 Dialog Mikey: Why didn't you say

    so earlier bro?! Baking is Science Page 46/196
  14. Scene 8 Panel 1 Dialog Mikey: I'm totally free to

    help out! Baking is Science Page 47/196
  15. Scene 8 Panel 2 Dialog Mikey: What can I do?

    Baking is Science Page 48/196
  16. Scene 8 Panel 4 Dialog Donnie: Think you can juice

    those limes? Baking is Science Page 50/196
  17. Scene 9 Panel 3 Dialog Mikey: They don't call me

    "Juice Master Mikey" for nothin! Baking is Science Page 53/196
  18. Scene 9 Panel 6 Dialog Mikey: how many did you

    say you need? Baking is Science Page 56/196
  19. Scene 10 Panel 3 Dialog Donnie: but that's what the

    recipe says. Baking is Science Page 59/196
  20. Scene 12 Panel 4 Dialog Mikey: I like tangy sweets

    much as the next guy, Baking is Science Page 65/196
  21. Scene 12 Panel 5 Dialog Mikey: but even I think

    that is waaaay too lime much for a pie. Baking is Science Page 66/196
  22. Scene 12 Panel 6 Dialog Mikey: You sure the recipe

    isn't wrong? Baking is Science Page 67/196
  23. Scene 13 Panel 2 Dialog Donnie: There's no way the

    recipe could be incorrect. Baking is Science Page 70/196
  24. Scene 13 Panel 3 Dialog Donnie: But to quell your

    blasphemous curiosity, Baking is Science Page 71/196
  25. Scene 13 Panel 4 Dialog Donnie: I'll give it a

    premature taste to show you that- Baking is Science Page 72/196
  26. Scene 14 Panel 2 Dialog Donnie: What the heck?! What

    went wrong?? Baking is Science Page 77/196
  27. Scene 15 Panel 1 Dialog Donnie: I'm positive I followed

    everything Baking is Science Page 78/196
  28. Scene 16 Panel 2 Dialog Donnie: How could I be

    so careless! The pie is ruined now! Baking is Science Page 81/196
  29. Scene 17 Panel 2 Dialog Mikey: It's just a little

    sour. Baking is Science Page 83/196
  30. Scene 17 Panel 8 Dialog Mikey: Go crazy! You can

    just put in whatever you want! Baking is Science Page 89/196
  31. Scene 20 Panel 1 Dialog Donnie: You can't just add

    whatever you want to a recipe! Baking is Science Page 96/196
  32. Scene 20 Panel 2 Dialog Donnie: You need to follow

    it precisely Baking is Science Page 97/196
  33. Scene 20 Panel 3 Dialog Donnie: and exactly. Otherwise the

    flavor ratio will- Baking is Science Page 98/196
  34. Scene 21 Panel 2 Dialog Donnie: If I just add

    together the ratio Baking is Science Page 101/196
  35. Scene 21 Panel 3 Dialog Donnie: of the rest of

    the Baking is Science Page 102/196
  36. Scene 21 Panel 5 Dialog Donnie: That should balance out

    the excess lime juice. Baking is Science Page 104/196
  37. Scene 21 Panel 6 Dialog Donnie: I just need to

    multiply everything by 9 Baking is Science Page 105/196
  38. Scene 21 Panel 7 Dialog Donnie: taking account the the

    conversion ratio between solids and liquids... Baking is Science Page 106/196
  39. Scene 21 Panel 9 Dialog Donnie: I have just enough

    time too. Baking is Science Page 108/196
  40. Scene 21 Panel 10 Dialog Donnie: I can make this

    work! Baking is Science Page 109/196
  41. Scene 25 Panel 1 Dialog Donnie: I'm sure it'll be

    perfect Baking is Science Page 132/196
  42. Scene 25 Panel 6 Dialog Donnie: How is it still

    so bad?! Baking is Science Page 137/196
  43. Scene 26 Panel 3 Dialog Donnie: Ughhh, maybe if I

    add more... Baking is Science Page 141/196
  44. Scene 26 Panel 4 Dialog Donnie: But then the ratio

    would be too... Baking is Science Page 142/196
  45. Scene 28 Panel 8 Dialog Donnie: Why did you do

    that?! Baking is Science Page 157/196
  46. Scene 29 Panel 1 Dialog Donnie: Do you know how

    much sugar is in that jar?? Baking is Science Page 158/196
  47. Scene 29 Panel 2 Dialog Donnie: Okay okay, I can

    fix this! Baking is Science Page 159/196
  48. Scene 29 Panel 3 Dialog Donnie: If I estimate that

    there's around 20g of sugar in that spoonful, Baking is Science Page 160/196
  49. Scene 29 Panel 4 Dialog Donnie: then if I add

    1/8 cup of milk... Baking is Science Page 161/196
  50. Scene 29 Panel 5 Dialog Donnie: Wait, does the milk

    come before the strawberries? Baking is Science Page 162/196
  51. Scene 29 Panel 6 Dialog Donnie: What was the strawberry

    to jam ratio again- Baking is Science Page 163/196
  52. Scene 30 Panel 1 Dialog Mikey: You don't need to

    calculate all that stuff. Baking is Science Page 165/196
  53. Scene 30 Panel 2 Dialog Mikey: It's not rocket science.

    Just add in whatever tastes good. Baking is Science Page 166/196
  54. Scene 31 Panel 1 Dialog Donnie: B-but, then I wouldn't

    be following the ratios laid out in the recipe. Baking is Science Page 167/196
  55. Scene 31 Panel 2 Dialog Donnie: I can't deviate from

    the... Baking is Science Page 168/196
  56. Scene 31 Panel 4 Dialog Donnie: I've already deviated from

    the recipe so much already, haven't I... Baking is Science Page 170/196
  57. Scene 31 Panel 8 Dialog Donnie: Okay, I'll try it

    your way Mikey. What do I do? Baking is Science Page 174/196
  58. Scene 32 Panel 2 Dialog Mikey: and follow your taste

    buds bro. Baking is Science Page 177/196
  59. Scene 34 Panel 2 Dialog Donnie: I'll admit, it's not

    horrible anymore, but... Baking is Science Page 182/196
  60. Scene 34 Panel 3 Dialog Donnie: I have some ideas

    for how to make it even better. Baking is Science Page 183/196
  61. Scene 35 Panel 2 Dialog Mikey: Ayyy, it didn't turn

    out too bad! Baking is Science Page 185/196
  62. Scene 35 Panel 3 Dialog Donnie: Yeah, the honey and

    banana worked really well Baking is Science Page 186/196
  63. Scene 35 Panel 4 Dialog Donnie: to balance out the

    flavor! Baking is Science Page 187/196
  64. Scene 35 Panel 5 Dialog Mikey: And now for the

    garnishing! Baking is Science Page 188/196
  65. Scene 35 Panel 8 Dialog Donnie: But I do think

    it could use more decorations. I'm thinking... Baking is Science Page 191/196