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Pickled Version 2 WIP

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April 23, 2024
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Pickled Version 2 WIP

WIP of the rewrite of Pickled.
In this version, two brothers meet a kind lady who lives on their street. She seems off, though...

Liv

April 23, 2024
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  4. Scene 3 Duration 05:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Neil:

    I can't go on Pickled-v3 Page 4/130

  5. Scene 3 Duration 05:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog Jesse:

    We can do it, Neil. Only have a few more blocks until- Pickled-v3 Page 5/130

  6. Scene 3 Duration 05:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog Jesse:

    We can do it, Neil. Only have a few more blocks until- Pickled-v3 Page 6/130

  7. Scene 3 Duration 05:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog [off/screen]:

    Are you boys ok? Pickled-v3 Page 7/130

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  9. Scene 4 Duration 03:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Jesse:

    We're fine, ma'am, Pickled-v3 Page 9/130

  10. Scene 4 Duration 03:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog Niel:

    It's too hot! Pickled-v3 Page 10/130

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  12. Scene 5 Duration 01:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Lucille:

    I have fresh lemonade if you'd like it. Pickled-v3 Page 12/130

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  16. Scene 7 Duration 03:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog Neil:

    Ahhhhhh. Pickled-v3 Page 16/130

  17. Scene 8 Duration 02:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Lucille:

    Wow, that's all of it. Pickled-v3 Page 17/130

  18. Scene 8 Duration 02:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog Lucille:

    Would like some tea as well? Pickled-v3 Page 18/130

  19. Scene 9 Duration 03:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Jesse:

    Oh, we wouldn't want to trouble you- Pickled-v3 Page 19/130

  20. Scene 9 Duration 03:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog Neil:

    Yes, please!!!! Pickled-v3 Page 20/130

  21. Scene 9 Duration 03:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Pickled-v3 Page

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  22. Scene 10 Duration 01:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog [water

    filling teapot] Pickled-v3 Page 22/130

  23. Scene 11 Duration 05:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Pickled-v3 Page

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  24. Scene 11 Duration 05:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog Jesse:

    We can't stay long. Ma is waiting for us. Pickled-v3 Page 24/130

  25. Scene 11 Duration 05:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog Neil:

    But I want tea. Pickled-v3 Page 25/130

  26. Scene 11 Duration 05:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Pickled-v3 Page

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  27. Scene 11 Duration 05:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Dialog Neil:

    Fine. Just behave, OK? Pickled-v3 Page 27/130

  28. Scene 12 Duration 02:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Neil:

    I'll be the bestest boy! Pickled-v3 Page 28/130

  29. Scene 12 Duration 02:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog Neil:

    I'll be the bestest boy! Pickled-v3 Page 29/130

  30. Scene 13 Duration 02:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Lucille,

    off screen: It's so nice to have company. Pickled-v3 Page 30/130

  31. Scene 13 Duration 02:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog Lucille,

    off screen: It's so nice to have company. Pickled-v3 Page 31/130

  32. Scene 14 Duration 01:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Lucille:

    Not many people visit. Pickled-v3 Page 32/130

  33. Scene 15 Duration 01:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Jesse:

    Oh? Do you live alone? Pickled-v3 Page 33/130

  34. Scene 16 Duration 01:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Lucille:

    Oh, no, I have my husband with me. Pickled-v3 Page 34/130

  35. Scene 17 Duration 02:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Jesse:

    I see, is he around? Pickled-v3 Page 35/130

  36. Scene 17 Duration 02:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog Jesse:

    I see, is he around? Pickled-v3 Page 36/130

  37. Scene 18 Duration 01:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Lucille:

    He's studying at this hour. Pickled-v3 Page 37/130

  38. Scene 19 Duration 02:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Lucille,

    offscreen: He's a surgeon. Pickled-v3 Page 38/130

  39. Scene 19 Duration 02:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog Jesse:

    A surgeon? Pickled-v3 Page 39/130

  40. Scene 20 Duration 02:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Jesse:

    That sounds like a uh. Challenging profession. Pickled-v3 Page 40/130

  41. Scene 20 Duration 02:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog Jesse:

    That sounds like a uh. Challenging profession. Pickled-v3 Page 41/130

  42. Scene 21 Duration 01:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Lucille:

    It is. Pickled-v3 Page 42/130

  43. Scene 22 Duration 01:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog He's

    got a deft hand, he does. Pickled-v3 Page 43/130

  44. Scene 23 Duration 01:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog He's

    got a deft hand, he does. Pickled-v3 Page 44/130

  45. Scene 24 Duration 05:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Jesse:

    I see. Pickled-v3 Page 45/130

  46. Scene 24 Duration 05:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog Jesse:

    What do you think Ne- Pickled-v3 Page 46/130

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  48. Scene 24 Duration 05:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog Jesse:

    What do you think he uh...does to keep motivated?? Pickled-v3 Page 48/130

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  50. Scene 25 Duration 01:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Lucille,

    offscreen: Well, Pickled-v3 Page 50/130

  51. Scene 26 Duration 01:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog he's

    always had a passion for helping people. Pickled-v3 Page 51/130

  52. Scene 27 Duration 02:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog even

    after 20 years. Pickled-v3 Page 52/130

  53. Scene 27 Duration 02:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog even

    after 20 years. Pickled-v3 Page 53/130

  54. Scene 28 Duration 02:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Jesse:

    Well, sure hope nothing Pickled-v3 Page 54/130

  55. Scene 28 Duration 02:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog LOUD

    disturbs his work! Pickled-v3 Page 55/130

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  66. Scene 33 Duration 02:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog Lucille:

    How do you prefer your- Pickled-v3 Page 66/130

  67. Scene 34 Duration 01:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Lucille:

    Oh. Where's your brother? Pickled-v3 Page 67/130

  68. Scene 35 Duration 02:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Jesse:

    Oh, he uh....drank too much lemonade. Pickled-v3 Page 68/130

  69. Scene 35 Duration 02:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog Jesse:

    Oh, he uh....drank too much lemonade. Pickled-v3 Page 69/130

  70. Scene 36 Duration 02:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Pickled-v3

    Page 70/130

  71. Scene 36 Duration 02:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog Lucille:

    Wouldn't he want to know where the toilet is? Pickled-v3 Page 71/130

  72. Scene 37 Duration 02:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Jesse:

    1) Uh... Pickled-v3 Page 72/130

  73. Scene 37 Duration 02:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog 2)

    He saw it on the way in. On the left, right? Pickled-v3 Page 73/130

  74. Scene 38 Duration 03:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Lucille:

    Hmm. Smart boy. Pickled-v3 Page 74/130

  75. Scene 38 Duration 03:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog Lucille:

    Hmm. Smart boy. Pickled-v3 Page 75/130

  76. Scene 38 Duration 03:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog -kettle

    whistles- Pickled-v3 Page 76/130

  77. Scene 39 Duration 01:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Lucille:

    He reminds me of my dear husband. Pickled-v3 Page 77/130

  78. Scene 40 Duration 02:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Lucille,

    off screen: He's not Pickled-v3 Page 78/130

  79. Scene 40 Duration 02:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog as

    active as your Pickled-v3 Page 79/130

  80. Scene 41 Duration 01:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog brother

    is now. Pickled-v3 Page 80/130

  81. Scene 42 Duration 03:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog As

    one ages, Pickled-v3 Page 81/130

  82. Scene 42 Duration 03:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog As

    one ages, Pickled-v3 Page 82/130

  83. Scene 42 Duration 03:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog they

    slow down, you see. Pickled-v3 Page 83/130

  84. Scene 43 Duration 03:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Jesse:

    I'd imagine. Pickled-v3 Page 84/130

  85. Scene 43 Duration 03:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog Lucille:

    Yes he's been so quiet these few years. Pickled-v3 Page 85/130

  86. Scene 43 Duration 03:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog Less

    jokes. Pickled-v3 Page 86/130

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  89. Scene 45 Duration 01:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Lucille:

    He hasn't been quite the same since... Pickled-v3 Page 89/130

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  91. Scene 47 Duration 01:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Lucille:

    The accident. Pickled-v3 Page 91/130

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  95. Scene 50 Duration 03:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Jesse:

    There you are, Niel. Pickled-v3 Page 95/130

  96. Scene 50 Duration 03:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog Jesse:

    What took you so long Pickled-v3 Page 96/130

  97. Scene 50 Duration 03:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog Jesse:

    in the bathroom? Pickled-v3 Page 97/130

  98. Scene 51 Duration 01:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Lucille:

    Oh, hello, Neil. Pickled-v3 Page 98/130

  99. Scene 52 Duration 03:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog We

    were waiting for you. The tea is ready. Pickled-v3 Page 99/130

  100. Scene 52 Duration 03:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog Lucille:

    Why don't I introduce you to my husband? Pickled-v3 Page 100/130

  101. Scene 52 Duration 03:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog Lucille:

    He'll live if we intrrupt him this once. Pickled-v3 Page 101/130

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  103. Scene 53 Duration 02:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog Jesse:

    You need to be more polite- Niel: -moves- Pickled-v3 Page 103/130

  104. Scene 54 Duration 01:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Neil:

    Let's leave. Pickled-v3 Page 104/130

  105. Scene 55 Duration 02:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Jesse:

    You're being weird. Pickled-v3 Page 105/130

  106. Scene 55 Duration 02:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog Jesse:

    Let's go. Pickled-v3 Page 106/130

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  111. Scene 57 Duration 02:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Lucille:

    1) Sorry to 2) Inturrupt, dear, but we have guests today. Pickled-v3 Page 111/130

  112. Scene 57 Duration 02:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog Lucille:

    1) Sorry to 2) Inturrupt, dear, but we have guests today. Pickled-v3 Page 112/130

  113. Scene 58 Duration 07:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Lucille,

    o/s: Boys! Come have Pickled-v3 Page 113/130

  114. Scene 58 Duration 07:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog Lucille,

    o/s: Some tea! Pickled-v3 Page 114/130

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  116. Scene 58 Duration 07:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog Jesse:

    No need to worry, it's just an old man. Pickled-v3 Page 116/130

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  118. Scene 58 Duration 07:00 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Dialog -curtain

    opens- Pickled-v3 Page 118/130

  119. Scene 58 Duration 07:00 Panel 7 Duration 01:00 Dialog Jesse:

    -horrified scream- Pickled-v3 Page 119/130

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  126. Scene 64 Duration 03:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog Lucille:

    Don't be shy, boys. Come chat with us. Pickled-v3 Page 126/130

  127. Scene 64 Duration 03:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog Lucille:

    I know you don't like being interrupted from your books, Pickled-v3 Page 127/130

  128. Scene 65 Duration 01:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Lucille:

    But you can stand to be social this once. Pickled-v3 Page 128/130

  129. Scene 66 Duration 02:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Lucille:

    Cheers! Pickled-v3 Page 129/130

  130. Scene 66 Duration 02:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog Lucille:

    -slurps- Pickled-v3 Page 130/130