Pickled Version 1

A kid discovers a dark secret about the old woman on his street.

When I pitched this version, it was much darker than what I had intended. So, I scrapped this script, and rewrote this as a lighter story. I still like the characters and dark humor of this version, though!

Transcript

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15. Scene 7 Duration 04:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog Silas: Are you nuts? Picked Head Page 15/152
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17. Scene 7 Duration 04:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog Silas: The lady that lives there is insane! Picked Head Page 17/152
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22. Scene 9 Duration 03:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Neil: What about the ball? Silas: We'll get a new one. Picked Head Page 22/152
23. Scene 9 Duration 03:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog Silas: Let's go. Picked Head Page 23/152
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30. Scene 10 Duration 06:01 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Dialog Kid: Boy, I love my coal mining job! Picked Head Page 30/152
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35. Scene 13 Duration 03:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog Heather: Telegram for you, Lucille. Picked Head Page 35/152
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38. Scene 14 Duration 02:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog Lucille: Oh, ribbons on sale at Bloomingdale's. Picked Head Page 38/152
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43. Scene 16 Duration 02:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog Lucille: Hmm... Picked Head Page 43/152
44. Scene 17 Duration 02:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog [coughing] Picked Head Page 44/152
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48. Scene 19_A Duration 03:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog [Knocking] Picked Head Page 48/152
49. Scene 19_A Duration 03:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog Ed: Mrs. Haas! Good to see you! Picked Head Page 49/152
50. Scene 19_A Duration 03:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog Ed: Come, come! Picked Head Page 50/152
51. Scene 20 Duration 03:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Ed: Your husband's request was Picked Head Page 51/152
52. Scene 20 Duration 03:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog Ed: quite the challange for us, Picked Head Page 52/152
53. Scene 20 Duration 03:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog Ed: But we made it work. Picked Head Page 53/152
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57. Scene 20_A Duration 07:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog Lucille: Wait, what request? Picked Head Page 57/152
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59. Scene 20_A Duration 07:00 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Dialog Ed: How about I just -show- you. Picked Head Page 59/152
60. Scene 20_A Duration 07:00 Panel 7 Duration 01:00 Dialog Ed: Eustice! She's here. Picked Head Page 60/152
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66. Scene 24 Duration 02:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Lucille: Levi... Picked Head Page 66/152
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68. Scene 25 Duration 03:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Ed: Oh, dear. Picked Head Page 68/152
69. Scene 25 Duration 03:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog Ed: Eustice, cover it up! Picked Head Page 69/152
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77. Scene 29 Duration 01:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Ed: Goddang Eustice. Picked Head Page 77/152
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82. Scene 32 Duration 01:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Ed: Oh, Mrs. Haas! Picked Head Page 82/152
83. Scene 33 Duration 03:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Ed: I didn't know you were here. Picked Head Page 83/152
84. Scene 33 Duration 03:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog Ed: Did Eustice let you in? Picked Head Page 84/152
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86. Scene 36 Duration 02:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Ed: Mrs. Haas? || Lucille: AH! Picked Head Page 86/152
87. Scene 36 Duration 02:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog Ed: So sorry, ma'am. So sorry. Picked Head Page 87/152
88. Scene 37 Duration 02:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Lucille: No, I am sorry. I have wandered in here like a spirit. My apologies. Picked Head Page 88/152
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92. Scene 39 Duration 02:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog Ed: You can take him home, if you'd like. Picked Head Page 92/152
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103. Scene 43 Duration 16:00 Panel 8 Duration 01:00 Dialog Lucille: Doesn't he look great? || Heather: Sure! Picked Head Page 103/152
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