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Berry Picking

Berry Picking

Prune and Plum, two wood-elf sisters, go berry picking.

Joleen Tseng

August 01, 2023
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  1. Scene 1 Duration 09:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Dialog (distance,

    two young voices) Berries! Berries! So many berries! Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 5/113
  2. Scene 1 Duration 09:00 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Dialog (distance,

    two young voices) Berries! Berries! So many berries! Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 6/113
  3. Scene 1 Duration 09:00 Panel 7 Duration 01:00 Dialog (distance,

    two young voices) Berries! Berries! So many berries! Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 7/113
  4. Scene 1 Duration 09:00 Panel 8 Duration 01:00 Dialog (distance,

    two young voices) Berries! Berries! So many berries! Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 8/113
  5. Scene 1 Duration 09:00 Panel 9 Duration 01:00 Dialog (distance,

    two young voices) Berries! Berries! So many berries! Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 9/113
  6. Scene 2 Duration 08:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog PRUNE

    & PLUM: Berries! Berries! So many berries! Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 10/113
  7. Scene 2 Duration 08:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Berry Picking

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  8. Scene 2 Duration 08:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Berry Picking

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  9. Scene 2 Duration 08:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Berry Picking

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  10. Scene 2 Duration 08:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Berry Picking

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  11. Scene 2 Duration 08:00 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Berry Picking

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  12. Scene 2 Duration 08:00 Panel 7 Duration 01:00 Berry Picking

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  13. Scene 2 Duration 08:00 Panel 8 Duration 01:00 Berry Picking

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  14. Scene 3 Duration 03:18 Panel 1 Duration 00:10 Berry Picking

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  15. Scene 3 Duration 03:18 Panel 2 Duration 00:10 Dialog Plum:

    Prune, silly. Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 19/113
  16. Scene 3 Duration 03:18 Panel 3 Duration 00:10 Dialog Plum:

    Don't eat too many berries or else there won't be enough left for Grandma's berry tart later! Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 20/113
  17. Scene 3 Duration 03:18 Panel 4 Duration 00:10 Dialog Prune:

    You're not my mom, Plum! Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 21/113
  18. Scene 3 Duration 03:18 Panel 5 Duration 00:10 Dialog Prune:

    You can't tell me what to do! Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 22/113
  19. Scene 3 Duration 03:18 Panel 6 Duration 00:10 Berry Picking

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  20. Scene 3 Duration 03:18 Panel 7 Duration 00:10 Berry Picking

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  21. Scene 3 Duration 03:18 Panel 8 Duration 00:10 Berry Picking

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  22. Scene 3 Duration 03:18 Panel 9 Duration 00:10 Dialog Prune:

    Besides, Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 26/113
  23. Scene 4 Duration 01:16 Panel 1 Duration 00:10 Dialog Prune:

    We have a Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 27/113
  24. Scene 4 Duration 01:16 Panel 2 Duration 00:10 Dialog Prune:

    WHOOOOLE Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 28/113
  25. Scene 4 Duration 01:16 Panel 3 Duration 00:10 Dialog Prune:

    basketful left! Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 29/113
  26. Scene 4 Duration 01:16 Panel 4 Duration 00:10 Dialog Prune:

    basketful left! Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 30/113
  27. Scene 5 Duration 05:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Berry Picking

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  28. Scene 5 Duration 05:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog Prune:

    Let's hurry up Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 32/113
  29. Scene 5 Duration 05:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog Prune:

    I can't wait Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 33/113
  30. Scene 5 Duration 05:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog Prune:

    to show everyone how many berries Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 34/113
  31. Scene 5 Duration 05:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Dialog Prune:

    we got! Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 35/113
  32. Scene 6 Duration 06:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Berry Picking

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  33. Scene 6 Duration 06:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Berry Picking

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  34. Scene 6 Duration 06:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Berry Picking

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  35. Scene 6 Duration 06:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Berry Picking

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  36. Scene 6 Duration 06:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Berry Picking

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  37. Scene 6 Duration 06:00 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Berry Picking

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  38. Scene 7 Duration 02:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Plum:

    Prune... Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 42/113
  39. Scene 7 Duration 02:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog Plum:

    WAIT!! Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 43/113
  40. Scene 8 Duration 02:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Prune:

    ?? Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 44/113
  41. Scene 8 Duration 02:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog Prune:

    ?? Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 45/113
  42. Scene 9 Duration 11:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog Prune

    & Plum: Waaaaah! Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 46/113
  43. Scene 9 Duration 11:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog Prune

    & Plum: Waaaaah! Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 47/113
  44. Scene 9 Duration 11:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Dialog Prune

    & Plum: Waaaaah! Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 48/113
  45. Scene 9 Duration 11:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog Prune

    & Plum: Waaaaah! Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 49/113
  46. Scene 9 Duration 11:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Berry Picking

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  47. Scene 9 Duration 11:00 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Dialog [SFX:

    THUD] Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 51/113
  48. Scene 9 Duration 11:00 Panel 7 Duration 01:00 Berry Picking

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  49. Scene 9 Duration 11:00 Panel 8 Duration 01:00 Berry Picking

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  50. Scene 9 Duration 11:00 Panel 9 Duration 01:00 Berry Picking

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  51. Scene 9 Duration 11:00 Panel 10 Duration 01:00 Berry Picking

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  52. Scene 9 Duration 11:00 Panel 11 Duration 01:00 Berry Picking

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  53. Scene 10 Duration 07:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog [Prune

    groans] Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 57/113
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    groans] Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 58/113
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    groans] Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 59/113
  56. Scene 10 Duration 07:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog [Prune

    groans] Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 60/113
  57. Scene 10 Duration 07:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Dialog Prune:

    Huh? Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 61/113
  58. Scene 10 Duration 07:00 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Dialog Prune:

    Huh? Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 62/113
  59. Scene 10 Duration 07:00 Panel 7 Duration 01:00 Berry Picking

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  60. Scene 11 Duration 05:00 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Berry Picking

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  61. Scene 11 Duration 05:00 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Berry Picking

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  62. Scene 11 Duration 05:00 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Berry Picking

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  63. Scene 11 Duration 05:00 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Berry Picking

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  64. Scene 11 Duration 05:00 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Berry Picking

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  65. Scene 12 Duration 10:13 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Berry Picking

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  66. Scene 12 Duration 10:13 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog Plum:

    Prune! Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 70/113
  67. Scene 12 Duration 10:13 Panel 3 Duration 01:00 Berry Picking

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  68. Scene 12 Duration 10:13 Panel 4 Duration 01:00 Dialog Plum:

    Oh Sune! Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 72/113
  69. Scene 12 Duration 10:13 Panel 5 Duration 01:00 Dialog Plum:

    Gods help us. Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 73/113
  70. Scene 12 Duration 10:13 Panel 6 Duration 01:00 Dialog Plum:

    Are you hurt? Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 74/113
  71. Scene 12 Duration 10:13 Panel 7 Duration 01:00 Dialog Plum:

    Are you hurt? Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 75/113
  72. Scene 12 Duration 10:13 Panel 8 Duration 01:00 Dialog Prune:

    ... Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 76/113
  73. Scene 12 Duration 10:13 Panel 9 Duration 01:00 Dialog [Prune

    inhales] Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 77/113
  74. Scene 12 Duration 10:13 Panel 10 Duration 00:13 Dialog Prune:

    WEEEEEHHHHH Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 78/113
  75. Scene 12 Duration 10:13 Panel 11 Duration 01:00 Dialog Prune:

    WEEEEEHHHHH Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 79/113
  76. Scene 13 Duration 06:23 Panel 1 Duration 00:10 Dialog Plum:

    Shhh, shhh. Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 80/113
  77. Scene 13 Duration 06:23 Panel 2 Duration 00:10 Dialog Plum:

    Shhh, shhh. Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 81/113
  78. Scene 13 Duration 06:23 Panel 3 Duration 00:10 Dialog Plum:

    It's gonna be ok. Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 82/113
  79. Scene 13 Duration 06:23 Panel 4 Duration 00:09 Dialog Plum

    (singing): You're Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 83/113
  80. Scene 13 Duration 06:23 Panel 5 Duration 00:06 Dialog [singing]

    Plum: O- Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 84/113
  81. Scene 13 Duration 06:23 Panel 6 Duration 01:22 Dialog [singing]

    Plum: -kay Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 85/113
  82. Scene 13 Duration 06:23 Panel 7 Duration 01:19 Dialog [singing]

    Plum: You're alright. Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 86/113
  83. Scene 13 Duration 06:23 Panel 8 Duration 00:05 Berry Picking

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  84. Scene 13 Duration 06:23 Panel 9 Duration 00:06 Berry Picking

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  85. Scene 14 Duration 05:08 Panel 1 Duration 01:07 Dialog Plum

    (singing): I'll never Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 90/113
  86. Scene 14 Duration 05:08 Panel 2 Duration 00:21 Dialog Plum

    (singing): ever Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 91/113
  87. Scene 14 Duration 05:08 Panel 3 Duration 00:21 Dialog Plum

    (singing): leave your Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 92/113
  88. Scene 14 Duration 05:08 Panel 4 Duration 02:07 Dialog Plum

    (singing): side. Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 93/113
  89. Scene 15 Duration 03:05 Panel 1 Duration 00:05 Dialog Plum

    (singing): I Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 94/113
  90. Scene 15 Duration 03:05 Panel 2 Duration 00:05 Dialog Plum

    (singing): I Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 95/113
  91. Scene 15 Duration 03:05 Panel 3 Duration 00:05 Dialog Plum

    (singing): I Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 96/113
  92. Scene 15 Duration 03:05 Panel 4 Duration 00:07 Dialog Plum

    (singing): will Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 97/113
  93. Scene 15 Duration 03:05 Panel 5 Duration 00:11 Dialog Plum

    (singing): stay Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 98/113
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    (singing): stay Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 99/113
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    (singing): stay Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 100/113
  96. Scene 15 Duration 03:05 Panel 8 Duration 00:09 Dialog Plum

    (singing): and Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 101/113
  97. Scene 16 Duration 09:13 Panel 1 Duration 01:19 Dialog Plum

    (singing): I will fight Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 102/113
  98. Scene 16 Duration 09:13 Panel 2 Duration 01:15 Dialog Plum

    (singing): -fight Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 103/113
  99. Scene 16 Duration 09:13 Panel 3 Duration 01:06 Dialog Plum

    (singing): with Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 104/113
  100. Scene 16 Duration 09:13 Panel 4 Duration 03:08 Dialog Plum

    (singing): you. Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 105/113
  101. Scene 16 Duration 09:13 Panel 5 Duration 01:13 Dialog Plum

    (singing): - with you. Berry Picking (rough, Work in Progress) Page 106/113
  102. Scene 17 Duration 03:20 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Berry Picking

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  103. Scene 17 Duration 03:20 Panel 2 Duration 00:12 Berry Picking

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