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The Poultrygeist - Excerpt

JJ
February 01, 2024

The Poultrygeist - Excerpt

When her kitchen studio becomes a paranormal nightmare, celebrity chef Dee Rummond (aka The Pilgrim Dame) resolves to completely film her latest episode, no matter the consequences.

This short is in a shooting style reminiscent of the film "Paranormal Activity."

JJ

February 01, 2024
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  1. Scene 2 Duration 09:16 Panel 1 Duration 00:16 Dialog Now,

    we’re going to toss these veggies into a skillet with some butter.
  2. Scene 2 Duration 09:16 Panel 2 Duration 00:12 Dialog Now,

    we’re going to toss these veggies into a skillet with some butter.
  3. Scene 2 Duration 09:16 Panel 3 Duration 00:12 Dialog Now,

    we’re going to toss these veggies into a skillet with some butter.
  4. Scene 2 Duration 09:16 Panel 4 Duration 00:08 Dialog Now,

    we’re going to toss these veggies into a skillet with some butter.
  5. Scene 2 Duration 09:16 Panel 5 Duration 00:16 Dialog Now,

    we’re going to toss these veggies into a skillet with some butter.
  6. Scene 2 Duration 09:16 Panel 9 Duration 02:00 Dialog You’re

    probably wondering why I added some parsnips to the mix!
  7. Scene 2_A_0 Duration 05:05 Panel 1 Duration 01:13 Dialog And

    now to season the veggies! Notes she's SO mean
  8. Scene 2_A_0 Duration 05:05 Panel 2 Duration 02:16 Dialog This

    is the most important part of any type of cooking.
  9. Scene 2_A Duration 04:08 Panel 2 Duration 02:12 Dialog All

    that seasoning adds so much flavor! Action Notes like three salt crystals fall into the pan
  10. Scene 2_A_1_A_0_A_999 Duration 09:12 Panel 1 Duration 02:20 Dialog Accidents

    always happen in the kitchen! Notes everything is normal! no haunting here :D
  11. Scene 2_A_1_A_0_A_999 Duration 09:12 Panel 2 Duration 05:04 Dialog I’ll

    have to have a talk with my intern about making sure breakable items aren’t so close to the edge! Notes that poor intern
  12. Scene 3_A Duration 02:16 Panel 1 Duration 01:00 Dialog To

    make my filling as thick and luscious as always,
  13. Scene 3_A Duration 02:16 Panel 2 Duration 01:00 Dialog To

    make my filling as thick and luscious as always,
  14. Scene 3_A_0 Duration 01:12 Panel 1 Duration 01:12 Dialog but

    not too much! It’s quite spicy. Notes ghost hand pushes over FULL SPICE RACK
  15. Scene 3 Duration 01:14 Panel 1 Duration 00:18 Dialog but

    not too much! It’s quite spicy. Notes ghost hand pushes over FULL SPICE RACK
  16. Scene 3_A_999_A Duration 15:09 Panel 2 Duration 02:17 Dialog That’s

    fine, I was feeling dangerous today anyway!
  17. Scene 3_A_999_A Duration 15:09 Panel 3 Duration 03:00 Dialog I’ll

    stir this for about a minute, and then I’ll add some white wine. Notes there's so much flour
  18. Scene 3_A_999_A Duration 15:09 Panel 4 Duration 01:06 Dialog It

    adds a subtle flavor, which is why I add lots more of it!
  19. Scene 3_A_999_A Duration 15:09 Panel 5 Duration 01:16 Dialog It

    adds a subtle flavor, which is why I add lots more of it!
  20. Scene 3_A_999_A Duration 15:09 Panel 6 Duration 00:16 Action Notes

    bottle sprays in the complete wrong direction: DIRECTLY at her face
  21. Scene 3_A_999_A Duration 15:09 Panel 8 Duration 02:18 Dialog Wow,

    I knew I loved to drink but this is excessive! Notes me too girl
  22. Scene 4_A Duration 04:15 Panel 1 Duration 00:08 Dialog Some

    people make their own dough, Notes she's slightly damp. a few flour stains
  23. Scene 4_A Duration 04:15 Panel 2 Duration 04:07 Dialog but

    I cheat and thaw some out from the supermarket. No one can ever tell the difference! Action Notes walks away from fridge, the sink faucet is trembling
  24. Scene 4_A_0 Duration 01:20 Panel 1 Duration 00:02 Action Notes

    sink EXPLODES and sprays her back to the fridge
  25. Scene 4_A_0 Duration 01:20 Panel 2 Duration 00:02 Action Notes

    sink EXPLODES and sprays her back to the fridge
  26. Scene 4 Duration 05:16 Panel 3 Duration 01:18 Dialog That’s

    fine. I can make my own dough. This is fine. Everything’s fine! Notes (it's not fine)
  27. Scene 4 Duration 05:16 Panel 4 Duration 01:14 Dialog That’s

    fine. I can make my own dough. This is fine. Everything’s fine! Action Notes eye twitch lol