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Don't Stop Walking

Don't Stop Walking

Shannon Weaver

June 08, 2021
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  1. Action Notes Intro flashback ends, police sirens wail as the

    officers gather to escort the new inmate arrival.
  2. Action Notes Close shot of Rose, now an adult, slowly

    zooming out as she leaves the back of the inmate transport vehicle.
  3. Dialog F: "Duke, I've been looking for you. Can I

    speak with you a moment?" D: "Of course."
  4. Dialog F: "The situation as it stands...well, lets just say

    our resources don't exactly have a protocol for herbivores with carnivorous tendencies. It's a scandal. You're the best man I have Duke, right in line to be as great as your father-"
  5. Dialog F: "We keep the worst down here in isolation,

    but there's a pipe leading out that's small enough for her to slip through if she were to break free. The prison's built for someone much bigger. I'm putting you on guard here until we find another facility."
  6. Dialog F: "She's current suspect in the past several cold

    cases, potentially over 5 years, she's a master of manipulation. Cunning as a fox. Jefferson was here when she first arrived, rode with her in the transport vehicle and has been in therapy since."
  7. Dialog D: "My dad made me wear this. When I

    grow up I need to have pointed ears like him. He's a police officer and wants me to be one too..."
  8. Dialog D: "No, you can't get my ears wet!" R:

    "Haha, too late! Drown, drown!"
  9. Dialog D:"I met a bunny today." Dad: "Mm." D:"She...said it

    was...well..she said I looked like a mummy with these ears." (Pause) Action Notes (Flashback to Duke at dinner with his Mom and Dad)
  10. Dialog D: "I'm sorry I didn't mean it I was

    just, she just.." Dad: "She?"
  11. Dialog Dad: "You know why you're here. It's the same

    reason your name is Duke and why you have your ears cropped. Why do you think you're here? Why your mother and I even had you. You're a born guard dog."
  12. Dialog 1: "You need to take a break, man" 2:

    "Oh, come one. You know that's not him. He's collecting all those sick days to go into early retirement." 1: "Well anyone would need a break after what he's been tasked to do."
  13. Dialog 2: "Yeah, a carnivor killer bunny? It's ridiculous. 1:

    "What's more...I heard she killed an old raccoon an evening stroll with her bare teeth." 2: "That's nothing, I heard she convinced a cougar to murder his wife and kids..."
  14. Dialog Dad: "You know what to do, Duke. You'll have

    to get used to it. Pretend it's someone you know...Someone who committed a horrible crime. Someone who will kill again. Aim. Fire."
  15. Dialog R: "Do what you want to do, like I

    will!" D: "Well what do you want to do?"
  16. Dialog R: "So bright and always above everyone else!" D:

    "You know that's impossible, right?"
  17. Dialog D: "Is this really what you wanted? Locked up

    in this cell, wasting away for what? For some kills, for fun? Fulfilling a God complex, was it really worth it?"
  18. Dialog R: "You're one to talk, Daddy's little boy through

    and through. God, you even look like hi-"
  19. Dialog R: "Why are you here, Duke?!" D" "Because you

    need to be guarded!" R: "NO, not that!"
  20. Dialog D: "I have to go. My Dad's job is

    moving away. This'll be the last time I can see you." Action Notes (Flashback begins)
  21. Dialog R: "Screw you and your stupid Dad, why do

    you have to listen to him?! Why would you leave!"
  22. Dialog R: "Tsk tsk, so sad for a young bunny.

    But not all that starts bad ends bad."
  23. Dialog R: "That summer defined me. At that time I

    resented you, I thought I needed you then."
  24. Dialog R: "Afraid. But now I'm grateful to you. I

    found out something about myself..."
  25. Dialog R: "'The natural order of things' is an excuse.

    They could kill me, consume me, and no one would bat an eye, I know. Why should my survival depend on defense... and not offense?"
  26. Dialog R: "That old me. The kind confined by my

    status on the food chain. I killed that part of me, Duke. The one I didn't like...."
  27. Dialog R: "You became everything they wanted you to become.

    He wanted you to become. I couldn't. I wouldn't. I refuse. Never will someone hold power over me anymore. Yeah, everything you heard is true."
  28. Dialog R: "I know it does. I know how everyone

    looks at me now, but at least I'm me."
  29. Dialog R: "Get out of here. Leave it behind. Walk

    out and keep walking, until your feet burn and your skin leaves tracks behind in the sidewalk. I've made my choice to be here..."